Friday, March 20, 2020
17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
I was surprised at the amount of positive feedback I received for my first pitch. I didn't think it was gonna be that good at first because of the many different takes it took me to get to the final one that I uploaded. One suggestion I received was to place my phone higher, which I did this time, so that my hand gestures were less distracting. I didn't change too much based on the feedback. I only changed the placement of my phone but I didn't change my habit of using hand gestures. I try to use them as a way to become engaged.
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Bernard,
ReplyDeleteI love the enthusiasm in your second pitch. I can tell by just your voice inflection that you care about this service. I honestly am surprised that no company has attempted to take on creating this idea. I think you have the business mind to actually start something like this one day. I also noticed how you added hand gestures into your pitch. I think hand gestures are a great public speaking tool. Great pitch Bernard!
Hi Bernard,
ReplyDeleteI really liked watching your elevator pitch! You are definitely the most enthusiastic person I've seen in any pitch yet. You seem very passionate about your product/service! This can take you a long way. I myself can 100% relate to this problem. Every gator basketball game I've been to I run into this problem. A food delivery service within the stadium would be a game-changer. Great overall pitch!
Hi, Bernard
ReplyDeleteI like the spirt that you bring into delivering your pitch. As I have told you before I think your idea is great and very feasible. Going back to your pitch you show confidence, determination and knowledge of your product/service. I like that you said in your video that your open to critics not I think that shows that you are open minded and willing to listen. Overall, great delivery and great idea.
Bernard,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job in your second pitch. After watching your elevator pitch, I am confident that your product will be successful in the market because you are providing a service that saves people time and make their experience better. This is a product I would definitely use because it allows me to watch the whole game from start to finish. Overall, I really enjoy your idea and I look forward to seeing it develop as we move forward with this class.
Hi Bernard,
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a great job with your second pitch. One thing that stood out to me was your increased confidence and enthusiasm in your pitch. I also thought you did a great job explaining the product and then telling the listener why it would be beneficial to them. Lastly, I think that you have a great product and I can tell in the video that you are passionate about it.